What about me
Was I what you thought at all
Did I live up to your fantasy
Did I step up to the call
What about you
Are you done with me at last
Have I used up your imagining
Your dream of what is past
What about us
Have you really seen me yet
Aren’t I someone after all
You never really met
What about us
What about us
What about us
What about me
Are you ready to let go
Can I wear my true colors now
Can I let my feelings show
What about you
Is this all that you have left
Editing realities
That brought us to this edge
What about this
Can I just be me again
Can you let me have my happiness
Can you just let us end
And what about us
What about us
What about us
What about me
Am I more than what you say
Can I tell my own story
Can I write it my own way
And what about you
You have your book of dreams
Are you rewriting this chapter
To make it fit the scene
What about it
Can I just be me again
Can you let me have my happiness
Can you just let it end
What about it
What about us
What about us
Sighhhhh………….again. I love your writing, your words make me feel…………..
“Editing realities
That brought us to this edge”
I so like this,Pearl
thanx again for sharing
I so thank you, my friend. And funny that, it was the only part I was unsure of.
::grin::
Maybe you should stay up all night more often. LOL. Just kidding. This one’s a keeper, very nice.
Thank you for putting words on my emotions…this is what I would say, if I didn’t let silence have it’s toll right now.
There is a stunning, heartbreaking poem by the author of Shantaram, you might now about him: Gregory David Roberts.
I think you would feel it:
http://inwardsun.wordpress.com/2009/08/24/begging-for-rain
inwardsun, thank you so much for your words.
And yes, it is a beautiful poem. I just read it.
–Pearl
You deserve your award btw!
Good night from Sweden!
::grin:: Goodnight from here.
If I were him…
I’d remain silent.
You’ve just said it all.
Stunning, honest and very well put. I love it….I’m very new here but look forward to reading more.
bryliejane–Thank you for your words, and welcome; I’ll surely be visiting you today.
–Pearl