Comments on: Premonition http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/2009/06/05/premonition/ Prophets reveal what is, but poets speak forth possibilities. Sat, 02 Jan 2010 19:10:03 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: oracleofthepearl http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/2009/06/05/premonition/#comment-482 oracleofthepearl Tue, 30 Jun 2009 03:30:32 +0000 http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/?p=918#comment-482 Disturbed--Well, considering this was written about a moment in time long long past, I'd have to say, well Hell NO. LOL. Neither way I used the word, ring, either. Still, these weird moments are sometimes like snapshots to me, and bring words long after the fact. Thanks for stopping by, it's good to see you about! --Pearl Disturbed–Well, considering this was written about a moment in time long long past, I’d have to say, well Hell NO. LOL. Neither way I used the word, ring, either.
Still, these weird moments are sometimes like snapshots to me, and bring words long after the fact.
Thanks for stopping by, it’s good to see you about!
–Pearl

]]> By: Disturbed Stranger http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/2009/06/05/premonition/#comment-481 Disturbed Stranger Mon, 29 Jun 2009 09:50:50 +0000 http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/?p=918#comment-481 Yes... But do yo really want that ring back? Yes… But do yo really want that ring back?

]]> By: oracleofthepearl http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/2009/06/05/premonition/#comment-478 oracleofthepearl Sun, 21 Jun 2009 21:58:19 +0000 http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/?p=918#comment-478 Well, Reah, thank you for this great compliment--I was reading it and thinking how happy I felt that it brings anyone to thoughts of their own experiences, when I got to the last of your comment. I welcome your thoughts! Thanks for visiting. --Pearl Well, Reah, thank you for this great compliment–I was reading it and thinking how happy I felt that it brings anyone to thoughts of their own experiences, when I got to the last of your comment. I welcome your thoughts! Thanks for visiting.
–Pearl

]]> By: Reah http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/2009/06/05/premonition/#comment-476 Reah Sat, 20 Jun 2009 13:34:01 +0000 http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/?p=918#comment-476 I must admit at times I find it difficult to comment on the words of others as I find myself forever affiliating my own experiences and emotions...but then I suppose that's what shows the measure of a true poet....I shall visit again soon xx I must admit at times I find it difficult to comment on the words of others as I find myself forever affiliating my own experiences and emotions…but then I suppose that’s what shows the measure of a true poet….I shall visit again soon xx

]]> By: neilina http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/2009/06/05/premonition/#comment-473 neilina Thu, 18 Jun 2009 13:51:44 +0000 http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/?p=918#comment-473 Really, very nice. And as soulstirrer said, the last line changed the meaning. I am just feeling to keep on reading this poem. Do write often, I really enjoy your poems! ~Blessings~ <em>neilina--thank you! As always, love to hear from you. --Pearl Really, very nice. And as soulstirrer said, the last line changed the meaning. I am just feeling to keep on reading this poem. Do write often, I really enjoy your poems!
~Blessings~

neilina–thank you! As always, love to hear from you.
–Pearl

]]> By: oracleofthepearl http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/2009/06/05/premonition/#comment-466 oracleofthepearl Sat, 06 Jun 2009 16:54:00 +0000 http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/?p=918#comment-466 Charles- Thank you for your thoughts. I don't really know what this poem says to anyone but me. I like to think that if it says anything at all, it is personal to the reader. But then, I just don't know. Sometimes they don't get built, but just come out this way, and then I have little perspective about them anyway. As for offending..it's interesting to hear anothers interpretation of what I've written even when it has little to do with my intent. And sometimes I don't even know why I wrote something. I think the only time I ever feel offended is when people believe they can judge me or my life by a piece of poetry, that it's always autobiographical, real time, or that writing out the Blues is somehow negative. But then, I guess that's the risk you take creating anything, eh? You are dead on in seeing disbelief, confusion, loss. And if you have experienced those feelings, coupled with KNOWING something that you also just could not already know, along with the feeling of repetition, then you read what I was saying quite clearly. Thanks for visiting, ---Pearl Charles-
Thank you for your thoughts.
I don’t really know what this poem says to anyone but me. I like to think that if it says anything at all, it is personal to the reader. But then, I just don’t know. Sometimes they don’t get built, but just come out this way, and then I have little perspective about them anyway.
As for offending..it’s interesting to hear anothers interpretation of what I’ve written even when it has little to do with my intent. And sometimes I don’t even know why I wrote something.
I think the only time I ever feel offended is when people believe they can judge me or my life by a piece of poetry, that it’s always autobiographical, real time, or that writing out the Blues is somehow negative.
But then, I guess that’s the risk you take creating anything, eh?
You are dead on in seeing disbelief, confusion, loss. And if you have experienced those feelings, coupled with KNOWING something that you also just could not already know, along with the feeling of repetition, then you read what I was saying quite clearly.
Thanks for visiting, —Pearl

]]> By: Charles http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/2009/06/05/premonition/#comment-464 Charles Sat, 06 Jun 2009 16:04:58 +0000 http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/?p=918#comment-464 I agree the last line changes everything but that my be assuming. The repetitiveness of your lines enunciates and insinuates a confusion, frustration... Disbelief. It's difficult or me to comment on poems like this because ones interpretation can turn into an assumption and I'm always afraid I'm going to say something wrong or offend the author. The imagery isn't quite as straight foreword as mine that I cannot go by the words themselves so much as the way it was written. Thus your poem is representative of confusion and pain therefore the last line suggests loss. I agree the last line changes everything but that my be assuming. The repetitiveness of your lines enunciates and insinuates a confusion, frustration… Disbelief. It’s difficult or me to comment on poems like this because ones interpretation can turn into an assumption and I’m always afraid I’m going to say something wrong or offend the author. The imagery isn’t quite as straight foreword as mine that I cannot go by the words themselves so much as the way it was written. Thus your poem is representative of confusion and pain therefore the last line suggests loss.

]]> By: oracleofthepearl http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/2009/06/05/premonition/#comment-463 oracleofthepearl Fri, 05 Jun 2009 16:45:52 +0000 http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/?p=918#comment-463 Thank you. Thank you.

]]> By: soulstirrer http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/2009/06/05/premonition/#comment-462 soulstirrer Fri, 05 Jun 2009 11:02:58 +0000 http://oracleofthepearl.wordpress.com/?p=918#comment-462 very deep and beautiful, last line has changed the feeling of the poem very deep and beautiful, last line has changed the feeling of the poem

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